1. I personally think that the annotated bibliographies helped alot with writing the full length paper because it gave you a picture of how the layout of your paper is going to look without overwhelming you. I do not think that student feedback for it however was helpful.
2. I received feedback that gave me constructive critisism that helped alot. It made me look at aspects of my paper that i never really looked into in depth and I think that in the end it made my paper better.
3. I think that the strongest parts of my paper is my research and quotes. I think that my weakest parts of my paper are my word choice and connectors between quotes or paraphrases.
4. I chose to write my paper on this topic because I have become very interested in it and I hope to one day get there.
Monday, February 25, 2013
Monday, February 4, 2013
research details
tuesday: 1 hour working on detailed outline- finished outline and turned it in
wednesday: 30 minutes doing research- found more information on my topic and went through sources in detail
thursday: 20 minutes more research- made more notecards and started finding where i wanted to use certain sources
wednesday: 30 minutes doing research- found more information on my topic and went through sources in detail
thursday: 20 minutes more research- made more notecards and started finding where i wanted to use certain sources
Monday, January 28, 2013
research topic
my research topic is on the stress, lack of sleep, and the effects of PTSD on surgeons. In my paper i will be looking closely at the questions of what patients want to know, how it effects the risks of surgery, and how it effects the lives of the surgeons themselves. Also the question of how can you help repair and potentially stop these questions and concerns. In my research i have learned that there are many things being done that we dont realize but when i look closely at them i realize why.
many surgeons suffer from fatigue, effects of PTSD, and stress and the reasons of why this is are sometimes overlooked. many people and even patients dont think about the fact that surgeons are known to work through the night, which would cause them to not get the full amount of sleep needed to be fully rested. when not fully rested, the likelihood of a complication becoming persent during a surgery increases. Many people dont think about this but now there are more people shining lights on the topic. This is creating controversy between doctors, patients, and hospital administrators because of the things that they are trying to do to prevent these problems.
many surgeons suffer from fatigue, effects of PTSD, and stress and the reasons of why this is are sometimes overlooked. many people and even patients dont think about the fact that surgeons are known to work through the night, which would cause them to not get the full amount of sleep needed to be fully rested. when not fully rested, the likelihood of a complication becoming persent during a surgery increases. Many people dont think about this but now there are more people shining lights on the topic. This is creating controversy between doctors, patients, and hospital administrators because of the things that they are trying to do to prevent these problems.
Saturday, December 15, 2012
reading focus
my reading focus is loss of innocence. I think that there are many ways you can look at this. you can look at it in the way of them growing up, or in the way of their actions almost going from being innocent and civil, to becoming savage.
the loss of innocence that i have been noticing it them becoming more savage. they are changing from being proper boys to become savage children that live on an island alone. they are having to grow up and fast.
in the begging of the book, the boys try and kill a pig but get scared. i think this is loss of innocence because they had never thought of killing an animal before and now thats the only thing they can do to survive. another way they are loosing their innocence is how they treat each other. at first they were all nice to one another and now they are hurting each other physically and mentally.
the loss of innocence that i have been noticing it them becoming more savage. they are changing from being proper boys to become savage children that live on an island alone. they are having to grow up and fast.
in the begging of the book, the boys try and kill a pig but get scared. i think this is loss of innocence because they had never thought of killing an animal before and now thats the only thing they can do to survive. another way they are loosing their innocence is how they treat each other. at first they were all nice to one another and now they are hurting each other physically and mentally.
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