Reflection

1. I personally think that the annotated bibliographies helped alot with writing the full length paper because it gave you a picture of how the layout of your paper is going to look without overwhelming you. I do not think that student feedback for it however was helpful.

2. I received feedback that gave me constructive critisism that helped alot. It made me look at aspects of my paper that i never really looked into in depth and I think that in the end it made my paper better.

3. I think that the strongest parts of my paper is my research and quotes. I think that my weakest parts of my paper are my word choice and connectors between quotes or paraphrases.

4. I chose to write my paper on this topic because I have become very interested in it and I hope to one day get there.

reading details

1:20 nervous conditions

research details

tuesday: 1 hour working on detailed outline- finished outline and turned it in
wednesday: 30 minutes doing research- found more information on my topic and went through sources in detail
thursday: 20 minutes more research- made more notecards and started finding where i wanted to use certain sources