Once day I was
walking down the dark
and dusty road. When I
see this road I
usually run---
This road is darker dark
than dark chocolate
and with the light
of the moon
like a lamp
shining on spots like
the spots on a dalmatian
you can see
lots of enjambment in lines to create drama in the lines
also there is alliteration, consonance and assonance
imagery paints a better picture
I like your imagery in the poem Sarah. You get the sense that any reader could have a slightly different interpretation. NIce Post.
ReplyDeleteThe words that you use in this poem gives me a great image in my mind. I think that you should join the poetry slam next year sarah catherine.
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